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Posted by: Don, May 26th, 2011, 4:38pm
Can't Be Stopped by Denis Dufresne - Short, Action, Sci Fi - A power hungry villian that can't be stopped. - html, format 8)
Posted by: Forgive, August 16th, 2011, 4:25pm; Reply: 1
Mmmm. Not too sure that I understood the ending here. I thought that English may not be your first language, and maybe you should get this looked over (StarNow etc). I think this maybe difficult to film for a short - could be quite expensive with all the special effects etc. I think that the ending may also need more of a punch to it.
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