Here's the link for my fourth produced short. Please enjoy....

http://youtu.be/cYdN95nFnFk

Michel 8)

Michel,

Good to see your name again.

Good job on this. I had to think about it for a bit.

Gary

Hey Michel

I enjoyed the film. From the description, one knows the situation from the start, of course, so not really anything to figure out. Without the description written below on youtube, one would figure it out when he picks up his old glove.

I liked the brick wall aspect.

I did have a general idea while watching. I was wondering if it might have added to the emotional aspect if you didn't show the face of the father playing catch and the mother knitting. Just show the father from the back, just the mother's hands knitting. This is my thinking: if the audience doesn't see their faces, they might have a tendency to fill in the face image themselves. And when they do that, there will be a natural instinct to fill in the blanks with images similar to their own mother and father. This could possibly ratchet up the emotional stakes even more.

Just an idea to consider for any future projects. But I liked the work, and I think it does capture what it possibly is like to experience death.

Thanks for sharing.

Michel,

Congratulations.  Is the script on the boards?  

Don

Thank you Don.

The short has been based on my short Anyone There?

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/Anyonethere.pdf

Quoted from michel Thank you Don. The short has been based on my short Anyone There? http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/Anyonethere.pdf

Thought so.  Thanks!  http://www.simplyscripts.com/2011/06/19/michels-anyone-there-filmed-as-awake/

Don

Finally "Endless Story..." should enter in preproduction very soon. It was about time. Almost one year I've been waiting for.... Of course, the script have been improved due ti the producer's will.... I'm eager to see what it could look like being filmed by a woman.....

http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/EndlessStory.pdf