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Posted by: Don, June 23rd, 2011, 7:59pm
One Night At The Oscars by John Simpson and Linda Laski - Comedy - A twentysomething clebrity hound couple plot to "rescue" betrothed Best actor and Actress nominees suffering a nuclear PR meltdown by kidnapping them and taking their places at the Academy Awards. 120 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: leitskev, June 23rd, 2011, 8:11pm; Reply: 1
Hey John and Linda

Take a look at your log line when you have a chance. It could use some work. First of all, a couple plots. That could be a type O. But the rest is a mouthful too, very awkward. Nominees suffer meltdowns, "a" nominee suffers "a" meltdown. Just give it a moment, I think, I'm sure you can fix it up.

Good luck, the story sounds intriguing.
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