Testing by John Newman - Short, Drama - A man poses as a wedding videographer in order to exact revenge upon the philandering fidelity tester who destroyed his marriage. 13 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi:)

I like the idea (at least as I understood it from the logline), but I'm completely confused. I mean I get how being all over the place can work, but it really doesn't here. It's just too much of a jumble to make any sense, IMO.

Also, you don't need all the cut to's because the scene headings tell us we're switching scene. The we's are a bit distracting too.

Anyway, it needs work, but I think it'll be a good read once you do a rewrite:)