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Posted by: Don, October 6th, 2011, 5:06pm

Schedule by Jamel King - Drama, Romance, Gay - About two lovers who discover what's best for their relationship. - celtx, format 8)

Posted by: Sandra Elstree., October 6th, 2011, 5:08pm; Reply: 1

Quoted from Don

Schedule by Jamel King - Drama, Romance, Gay - About to lovers who discover whats best for their relationship. - celtx, format 8)

"About to lovers who discover..."

This obvious typo in the logline cancels the read for me. :-/

Sorry,

Sandra

Posted by: Eoin, October 7th, 2011, 6:05am; Reply: 2

Got the following error when opening this script . . .

The XML page cannot be displayed
Cannot view XML input using style sheet. Please correct the error and then click the Refresh button, or try again later.

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Invalid at the top level of the document. Error processing resource 'http://www.simplyscripts.com/scripts/Schedule.celtx'. ...

PK
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I agree with Sandra's comment on the logline.

Posted by: Don, October 7th, 2011, 9:44am; Reply: 3

Quoted from Eoin

Eoin,

This is a celtx file. It won't open in your browser. The software if free and is a quick download and install at: celtx.com

Don

Posted by: Eoin, October 7th, 2011, 10:49am; Reply: 4

Thanks Don, I have Celtx on my laptop but not on my PC at work, hence the error. I guess PDF is always the best option when sending a script.

Posted by: Forgive, October 29th, 2011, 7:38pm; Reply: 5

This is a little bit all over the place.

You need to learn a little bit more about screenwriting, and you need to learn how to use Celtx. For a good resource, go to 'wiki.celtx.com'.

Your 'shots' need to be changed to action lines.

You also need to pull a lot of info from your parentheticals into action lines.

Lastly Celtx will convert a file to PDF - you can use that to post and then everyone can read it.