9ine-one-one by Anthony Silverwood - Horror - When the police in Paradise falls switch to a radio frequency haunted by one of Hell's oldest and most sinister demons, the town becomes ground zero of the apocalypse. the last days have begun, and 911 is the last number your should call. 102 pages - pdf, format 8)

You need to download Celtx, which is free script-formatting software. Also, you should use regular punctuation in your action lines--get rid of the colons and use a period instead. Plus, you don't need to put exclamation points in parenthesis.

You have an interesting premise, but it isn't going to get read with all of the formatting errors. Also, most horror scripts are about 90 pages, so I suggest you cut some stuff to make this shorter.