i've read plenty of great screenwriting sites on the net that have helped (Scriptshadow, John August's blog just to name a couple) but I was wondering if anyone has a link to a site that breaks down good description with examples?

I think I write better dialogue than descroption and would really like to "master" that art.  I have way too many walking and looking type lines of description which I feel can get the ax very easily and I'd like to see a nice write up about it.

I read professional scripts and take notes, but I'm admittedly looking for one or two articles just as context so I don't have to search through all the scripts I have.

thanks.

I have the same problem sometimes. 'Look' is a killer!

I *think* the best way to tackle it is to just read lists of verbs and synonyms. The thesaurus is a great resource, too, and there are free ones online:)

HTH!

the thesaurus is my best friend.  final draft as one built in, but i tend to just use thesaurus.com

There are a MASSIVE number of articles here.  Use their search to find articles about action.

http://thescriptlab.com/

looks like i got a new site to spend hours on, thanks