The Ghetto of Princeton by Sam Klien - Short - A mockumentary about the 'ghetto' of princeton. 9 pages - pdf, format 8)

Well, for starters you have camera directions in your script...that's a buzkill man. Leave that to the director. Honestly couldn't finish this. The Ben character came off very stereotypical in the dialogue, and seemed like you just put together a bunch of stereotypical language. I'm black, and use slang in my own speech, as well as hear it from friends nd family, and the dialogue (the little I read...sorry) came off kinda corny. Sorry man...

Actually, camera angles are allowed in mockumentaries as the camera become an interactive character.


Phil