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Posted by: Don, May 24th, 2012, 4:59pm
Passion Of Christ- Judgment Day by Vernon - Drama - Schindlers list meets 2012 meets the crucible. Skye and his sister live in a time before and after Christs return and race towards the Judgements seat where life as we know it ends and a beautiful afterlife appears. 96 pages - doc, format 8)
Posted by: Nomad, May 25th, 2012, 10:50am; Reply: 1
HORRIBLY FORMATTED
SPELLING ERRORS
POORLY WRITTEN

Please read some books on screenwriting.
There is free screenwriting software out there (Celtx).  Please use it.
You may have a great story here, but nobody is going to read this.
Posted by: Forgive, May 25th, 2012, 6:55pm; Reply: 2
Okay - it's interesting ... but it really hard work. There's no need to re-invent the wheel, either. There's standards for formatting, so you might want to check them out. Less capitals, more clarity, maybe?
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