Print Topic

SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board  /  Drama Scripts  /  Love Your Enemies
Posted by: Don, June 20th, 2012, 6:19am
Love Your Enemies by Michael Houk - Drama - A woman, long troubled and depressed, found love in the form of an amazing husband and family. But now, all of that may be over when she hears he had an 'accident.' - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Forgive, June 25th, 2012, 3:55pm; Reply: 1
Sorry Michael - this is way off the mark. It's so way off, it doesn't even know where the mark is:

BLACK SCREEN
The screen is pitch-black, and displays nothing. Then, two lines of text appear (one above the other) which read -- "INLOVING MEMORY OF" and "ERIC JOHN HOUK" in full caps.

-- should read something like:

ON BLACK:

SUPER: "IN LOVING MEMORY OF ERIC JOHN HOUK"

simple as that.
Print page generated: April 29th, 2024, 12:11am