Saving Helga by David Whitehead - Drama - A loving English couple foster a German girl caught up in the nightmare of the Holocaust 123 pages - pdf, format 8)

This ... really isn't good.

The font on the first two pages is really off-putting and the capitalizations is all over the place.

Slugs should zone in, not out.

The writing is okay in general, but it's not really adapted to a script.

Needs a re-work.