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Posted by: Don, July 24th, 2012, 7:23pm
Future Girl by Freddie G. Owens (freddie moon) - Sci Fi, Superhero - It's a teenage Wonder Woman meets Harry Potter. 125 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Forgive, August 28th, 2012, 7:11pm; Reply: 1
"It's a teenage Wonder Woman meets Harry Potter."

Oh, it so ain't.
Posted by: Redfly, August 29th, 2012, 12:44pm; Reply: 2
Yeah.  I was a bit confused...by the logline...and then the contents of the script.  I think you need to work on the logline so it says something about your actual script/plot, rather than comparing it to other properties.  (And I'm not certain that's an apt comparison).

I'm sorry, but...I was unable to get passed the first few pages of the script.  It was a tough read, in my opinion, but nothing that can't be fixed.

Good luck in your future writing.
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