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Posted by: Don, September 23rd, 2012, 5:50am
Selfless by Breanne Mattson - Short, Drama, Thriller, Sci Fi - A woman discovers she’s no longer herself. 15 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, September 23rd, 2012, 11:19am; Reply: 1
Thanks Don!

The movie can be viewed here.

:)
Posted by: M.Alexander, September 23rd, 2012, 12:45pm; Reply: 2


Whenever I trried to watch the vid it buffered every 5 seconds, so I gave up trying.  Glad to finally read the script.  Definitely Twlight Zonie-ish.  Made me think of the movie Another Earth.  

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1549572/

Good job on creating dramatic tension with an interesting twist.
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, September 23rd, 2012, 2:59pm; Reply: 3

Quoted from M.Alexander
Whenever I trried to watch the vid it buffered every 5 seconds, so I gave up trying.  Glad to finally read the script.  Definitely Twlight Zonie-ish.  Made me think of the movie Another Earth.  

http://www.imdb.com/title/tt1549572/

Good job on creating dramatic tension with an interesting twist.


Thanks, M.

Sorry you couldn't watch the movie. :( Not sure what the problem is. You're the first person I'm aware of who's had any trouble loading it.

Love Rod Serling. He's definitely an influence.

I'm vaguely aware of Another Earth, though I've never seen it. I'll try and check it out sometime.

Thanks! :)
Posted by: ghost and_ghostie gal, September 23rd, 2012, 6:38pm; Reply: 4
Breanne,

Thanks for posting...(To be honest, i didn't think you would).  As I said before I enjoyed the film, but it was nice to finally get to read the script.

All the best wishes...

Ghostie
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, September 24th, 2012, 11:19am; Reply: 5

Thanks for posting...(To be honest, i didn't think you would).


Thanks Ghostie. I submitted it a while ago, it took time because of the backlog. Thanks for checking it out! :)

Posted by: CoopBazinga, September 25th, 2012, 2:50am; Reply: 6
Hey Breanne,

After watching the film, I was interested to check out the script as well. An interesting read no doubt, thought Dr. Roth was a bit subdued in the script and was a lot better in the actual finished film. Don't know why? Guess he stood out to me.

Anyway, thanks for posting. :)

Steve
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, September 25th, 2012, 11:17am; Reply: 7

Quoted from CoopBazinga
After watching the film, I was interested to check out the script as well. An interesting read no doubt, thought Dr. Roth was a bit subdued in the script and was a lot better in the actual finished film. Don't know why? Guess he stood out to me.


Thanks, Steve.

I agree. The actor added a lot to the character. Dr. Roth reads much drier to me now than before. That's one of the great things about movies versus scripts.

Thanks for commenting!  :)
Posted by: vancety, November 28th, 2012, 7:11am; Reply: 8
Really liked this script! Kept me reading.
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, November 28th, 2012, 8:39pm; Reply: 9
Thanks, Vancety, for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it. :) If you haven't seen the short film, I hope you check it out when you get the chance.
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