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Posted by: Don, September 26th, 2012, 6:57pm
Picerno by Ian Weeks - Action, Adventure - When a young actor from a poor family in a poverty-stricken Brazilian town gets a part in a big soap opera, he battles across the desert landscape towards Rio de Janeiro and encounters a State Trooper who is hell-bent on destroying his life. - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Gage, September 30th, 2012, 8:07pm; Reply: 1
Hey Ian,

Haven't seen you on the boards.  This link is... weird; makes it very hard to read the screenplay.  A PDF hosted on Dropbox would be immensely preferred.

Gage
Posted by: Steex, October 5th, 2012, 1:54pm; Reply: 2
Yeah, Asteroid is right.
It is extremely hard to read.
The action/description is like a foot long.

But I can say, from the few pages I read, you seem like a pretty decent writer.
I did notice a few typos, but that's no big deal in the long run.
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