Bethany (was Blond Bomber) by Brandon Coleman - Drama - A housewife and mother of two starts down a most unusual path when she's approached by a former boxing trainer. 121 pages. - pdf, format 8)

Thank you for posting my revision, Don. All comments and critiques are welcome.

I remember this from the original - have you cut down on it some? - I think it reads a little cleaner. Let me know if you're still around.

Quoted from Forgive I remember this from the original - have you cut down on it some? - I think it reads a little cleaner. Let me know if you're still around.

Yes. I cut down on the story. I had to tighten it up and clean up some blatant errors riddled throughout. Thanks for keeping interested in my story. Of course I'm still around. I like this place.  :)