SimplyScripts Screenwriting Discussion Board / October 2012 One Week Challenge / A drum, a drum! - owc
Posted by: Don, October 1st, 2012, 6:42pm
The October 2012 One Week Challenge doth come!
As in years past, this will be open to anyone regardless if he/she is a discussion board member. Writers have one week to write a short script 10 to 12 pages on the theme and genre announced on October 10th.
This is not a contest. This is a fun exercise. Participants will be asked to select a 'writer's choice' script.
Schedule:
Wednesday, October 12th - Genre and Topic Released Scripts Due Friday, October 19th at 11:59 pm edt October 21 posting of scripts. October 27th - Writer's choice selections due.
More Later,
Don
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 1st, 2012, 6:50pm; Reply: 1
Yay :) finally!!!
Way to go Don!! Cheers!
Posted by: Forgive, October 1st, 2012, 7:16pm; Reply: 2
Mr Stupid's wondering what edt means?
Posted by: leitskev, October 1st, 2012, 7:40pm; Reply: 3
Stop talking about me Simon!
Ok, I was wondering. You got me.
I plan on being in. I will always want to find time for these. Looking forward to it!
Posted by: danbotha, October 1st, 2012, 7:45pm; Reply: 4
Don, your timing is perfect! Can't wait to take part in my first OWC ever :)
Posted by: Don, October 1st, 2012, 7:51pm; Reply: 5
The entirety of the OWC takes place in Eastern Daylight Time which is UTC/GMT -4 hours. So, the OWC is a little bit harder for anyone who doesn't live on the Eastern Seaboard of the US and A. Everyone else has to do math.
Don
Posted by: Forgive, October 1st, 2012, 8:11pm; Reply: 6
This is typical of Brit-hating Yanks.
Not you Kev - just the rest of America ;D
-- Don't know if I'm in with a script - but I'll be reading.
Posted by: DarrenJamesSeeley, October 1st, 2012, 8:23pm; Reply: 7
I'll consider it.
But why are you quoting MacBeth?
Also, will there be aliases and alibis?
Posted by: Don, October 1st, 2012, 8:40pm; Reply: 8
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 1st, 2012, 9:48pm; Reply: 9
My birthday!!!!!
I'm too busy, but maybe I can be part somehow.... ;D
Posted by: nawazm11, October 1st, 2012, 10:23pm; Reply: 10
Sounds great. Surely this can't be as bad as my previous October OWC script. :P
Posted by: khamanna, October 2nd, 2012, 12:36am; Reply: 11
Oh, the fun is back! I'll try and participate but let's see... Ever since I moved it's all kind of stuff on the way. Thanks anyway, Don!
Posted by: alffy, October 2nd, 2012, 1:39am; Reply: 12
Been a while since I took part in a owc so might give it a go...might.
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 2nd, 2012, 5:11am; Reply: 13
I'll have a stab, until I see the theme of course!
Nothing like an OWC for two weeks of roller coaster
Posted by: Steex, October 2nd, 2012, 6:13am; Reply: 14
I've been waiting for this for a long time. Probably the most excited I've been in awhile.
Fun, fun, fun!
Posted by: bert, October 2nd, 2012, 6:53am; Reply: 15
Quoted from The Boss
Wednesday, October 10th - Genre and Topic Released Scripts Due Wednesday, October 17th at 11:59 pm edt
Wednesday to Wednesday? What gives?
Whenever I play, I always look forward to that initial late-night burst on the first Friday -- and I know others squeeze every last minute out of the midnight deadline on the second Friday. Might be tough on a Wednesday.
Not that it matters a great deal. Just curious.
October is always my favorite one. Keeping my fingers crossed for horror. Been a while since I trotted out something new.
Posted by: Gage, October 2nd, 2012, 7:52am; Reply: 16
Can't wait for my first OWC! In October (obviously the greatest month), no less! Let the games begin!
Posted by: Breanne Mattson, October 2nd, 2012, 11:01am; Reply: 17
Was October 2011 really the last one? Wow. I'm surprised by that.
I won't be able to enter. Things will be too hectic with a shoot coming up in November, but I'll try and read some.
Posted by: DarrenJamesSeeley, October 2nd, 2012, 11:17am; Reply: 18
Was October 2011 really the last one? Wow. I'm surprised by that.
No, there was one back in Febuary. The thread -topic is wayyyyyy down. The theme was witchcraft, but in a non-fantasy/horror setting and a springboard for the recent 7wk if I'm not mistaken
Posted by: Felipe, October 2nd, 2012, 11:36am; Reply: 19
Technically, last year's October OWC was the last official OWC where people wrote shorts. The one this year was a "First 10 pages" challenge.
There was the unofficial one last december though, but there were only like 8 scripts.
Posted by: irish eyes, October 2nd, 2012, 2:16pm; Reply: 20
It returns... Looking forward to some quality reads.
Mark
Posted by: ReneC, October 2nd, 2012, 2:20pm; Reply: 21
I'm always up for a challenge. Unless I have to do a drop-everything rewrite, then that becomes the challenge.
Pencil me in. A little harder. Oh, use a goddamn pen already!
Posted by: Electric Dreamer, October 2nd, 2012, 2:27pm; Reply: 22
Ack! If it was one week later I'd defo be in. Clone Wife rewrite going slower than I want. :P I'll see if I can slide something under the wire anyway!
Regards, E.D.
Posted by: stevie, October 2nd, 2012, 2:48pm; Reply: 23
My Marilyn feature hasn't been doing much lately so the OWC enema will be welcome... ;D :X
Posted by: RayW, October 2nd, 2012, 4:06pm; Reply: 24
Writers have one week to write a short script 10 to 12 pages on the theme and genre announced on October 10th.
How many pages are they expecting? 10 to 12
Clear as crystal, now? ;)
Posted by: jwent6688, October 2nd, 2012, 6:24pm; Reply: 29
Stick to the page limits. 10-12. Or you shall suffer an online bludgeoning, the likes of which you've never seen.
James
Posted by: danbotha, October 2nd, 2012, 6:34pm; Reply: 30
Does the title page go towards the page count? Seems like a pretty stupid question, doesn't it?
Posted by: RayW, October 2nd, 2012, 6:38pm; Reply: 31
I'm going to guess by that relatively "large" page limit the genre WON'T be horror. Otherwise it'll be 30+ entries x an average of 11pgs ea. = easily >330pgs + comments to read.
8 - 10 pages for horror is traditionally enough to make us all ill from reading+analysis more than writing. And I'm more durable than most.
'twill be interesting to see what rabbit pops outta da hat 101012.
Posted by: Forgive, October 2nd, 2012, 6:38pm; Reply: 32
Can I do 11 pages? Is that allowed? It doesn't say 11 pages, but I might do 11 anyway. Can someone explain it t me. I don't understand.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 2nd, 2012, 6:42pm; Reply: 33
How about... we first change the word "pages" to "dollars" and then change the whole statement to "We will pay you 10 to 12 dollars."
How many "dollars" are you expecting? 10 to 12.
How many pages are they expecting? 10 to 12
Clear as crystal, now? ;)
Thanks for the incredibly helpful response!
I understand what his wording implies. I'm asking if that's a mistake, because it seems like an incredibly narrow and high page specification. Especially for people who end up having script ideas that really should be 5 pages long and end up filling the rest of it with fluff to meet the page demands. It could make for some very tedious reads.
It's not a bad idea to allow people to write up to 12 pages, but as I'm sure most of us have figured it out by now, a lot of 12 pagers really should have been 4-6 pagers with tight editing.
Though I'm glad I gave you a chance to show of your flawless thinking skills.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 2nd, 2012, 6:53pm; Reply: 35
You need to write a 10-12 pager with tight editing and no padding. We all will know if you're padding. And the title page does not count toward the page count.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 2nd, 2012, 6:54pm; Reply: 36
OWC has never had the page limit at 5 pages, I'm pretty sure. I believe the page limit came about years ago when some people decided to submit 1-3 ( ;D ) page pissers.
Posted by: Felipe, October 2nd, 2012, 6:58pm; Reply: 37
Alrighty then, will do.
I'm not saying people won't know when you're padding. I'm saying some writers don't know when they are padding. And then we end up reading it.
Posted by: stevie, October 2nd, 2012, 10:27pm; Reply: 38
Quoted from mcornetto
You need to write a 10-12 pager with tight editing and no padding. We all will know if you're padding. And the title page does not count toward the page count.
Exactly.
And a page with The End on it doesn't count either... ::)
Posted by: Don, October 3rd, 2012, 6:19am; Reply: 39
Halloween is on a Wednesday. Not that there is a connection between the OWC and Halloween.
Folks. Don't get too hung up on the page limitations, yet. I originally wrote 10 to 12. I may move that up or down. On October 10, when the theme and genre are announced, I will layout the framework for the challenge.
Don
Posted by: CoopBazinga, October 3rd, 2012, 9:16am; Reply: 40
Cool! My first October OWC. Hopefully will take part but I guess that depends on the theme?
I doubt I’ll be reading all the entries this time though; doesn’t the October OWC have almost double the entries to what a normal OWC has?
I guess we'll see...
Posted by: bert, October 3rd, 2012, 9:21am; Reply: 41
...doesn’t the October OWC have almost double the entries to what a normal OWC has?
When the genre is Horror, nearly everyone "plays" -- so the turnout is big, both writers and readers.
But, of course, the genre can't always be Horror. We accept that.
But come the Halloween season, we at least get to cross our fingers for a little carnage....
Posted by: Mr.Ripley, October 3rd, 2012, 9:23am; Reply: 42
Good luck to all. Can't wait to read the entries.
Gabe
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, October 3rd, 2012, 9:26am; Reply: 43
You know, I only participated in said horror OWC once. People liked the script despite the fact I didn't but they all agreed I completely destroyed the rules. Horror and I is like comedy and I, they just don't mix.
Posted by: Steex, October 3rd, 2012, 9:06pm; Reply: 44
How about a nice October Romantic Comedy?
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 3rd, 2012, 9:17pm; Reply: 45
Sorry, Steex but it's a month away from Halloween! Let's get something spooky happening here! Maybe a romantic horror? Or even a horror comedy, don't see many of them nowadays... Except for the infamous Cannibal. ;D ;D
Posted by: nawazm11, October 4th, 2012, 1:49am; Reply: 47
I'd bastardize it into a horror romcom. Two sociopath mutants go out on a date. Love tryst between vampire & werewolf. Dr Frankenstein makes love to his monster. And then they switch.
Ear pinna are different. But they could be cousins!
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 4th, 2012, 10:38am; Reply: 50
I don't really care, just excited there is going to be one.
I normally have an idea with each challenge so let's hope it isn't the one exception. A few past challenges iwould have been tough, indeed I hope it isn't an action based script. That could be tedious.
My one other hope is that Ray doesn't post more weird videos, that current one is seriously creepy.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 4th, 2012, 2:08pm; Reply: 51
YES!!! Woohoo! Very happy to see this.
Been in Indy all week on business. After partying like I have this week, I need a frickin' vacation. At least I'll have a 3 day weekend, as I feel like I've put my time in already this week wining and dining.
It always amazes me how many incredibly stupid questions peeps throw out whenever an OWC is announced. Just downright silly. 10-12 pages, not including a title page. Seems pretty simple so far. Just wait till a theme is announcced. I can already see the inane questions pouring in...
Theme - horror involving a werewolf - does the werewolf have to have teeth and hair?
horror involving all human characters - Can we include dead non human characters?
horror set in the woods - Does it matter what kind of trees make up these woods? What about using just shrubs and bushes?
horror aboard a ship at sea - how big does the ship have to be? Can it be a submarine?
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
Looking forward to the actual OWC as well as the dumbass questions we're going to get.
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 4th, 2012, 2:44pm; Reply: 52
Welcome back Jeff!
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 4th, 2012, 2:49pm; Reply: 53
LOL Jeff!
That happens every month at MP! ;D
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 4th, 2012, 3:09pm; Reply: 54
Just trying to get the natives riled up as well as fired up.
Hanging at a Marriott Courtyard, waiting for a taxi to get my oh so hung over ass to the airport so I can sleep...per chance to dream. I feel like I've been in Vegas for 3 days - oh the alcohol intake...scary...seriously scary.
Would it surprise anyone that I missed every single morning meeting? 3 hour time difference is a killer going fom west to east. I guess it probably doesn't help when you're slamming Red Ketels and double Jagers until literally 3:30 AM.
You'd think at my age I'd learn my lesson at some point, but then again, old dogs rarely learn new tricks...
...but I do have a few new tricks up my sleeve for this OWC.
BWOOHAHA!!!!!! ;D ;D ;D
Posted by: Felipe, October 4th, 2012, 3:28pm; Reply: 55
Sorry for the incredibly stupid question > Didn't think I would offend so many people.
As I stated before, I knew exactly what his wording meant. It just seemed very specific to me so I was checking if it wasn't a typo.
No need to turn this into a middle school classroom where teachers belittle students into not participating.
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 4th, 2012, 4:30pm; Reply: 56
Tonight, i was trying to describe an OWC to a non writer friend. It wasn't easy. After all, i"ve only taken part in three but i feel as if i understand what happens...ie chaos, with a touch or bar fight, mixed with uncertainty and fear, plus...
All the others competitions (sorry OWC isn't a competition) are lovely, and i do adore MP, but it is so different.
gosh i'm looking forward to this...
and Jeff, bring it on... I just hope a few of the regulars turn up, have a go etc its only an ego we have to lose after all!!
here's to wednesday, what a lead up
Posted by: Steex, October 4th, 2012, 4:35pm; Reply: 57
BTW, the "romantic comedy" suggestion was a joke. I guess I have horrible internet joke delivery...
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 4th, 2012, 4:39pm; Reply: 58
No reason to be offended, Felipe! This happens every time and like I said, it happens every month at MP too. Just the way it is.
The OWC is traditionally a bit like a brawl! Brace yourselves!! ;D
Posted by: Felipe, October 4th, 2012, 4:57pm; Reply: 59
I can take it. It just seems like a bummer to treat people that way. Particularly new people who would probably just stop showing up on the site from all the animosity.
This site can be real slow sometimes, so my complaint isn't so much that everyone is harping on my "dumbass question," but the fact taht this is what keeps people from participating.
And the answer will always be, "If they can't handle it, then we don't want them here," but I couldn't disagree more. I wish more people posted here on a regular basis. Sometimes I find myself hitting refresh on the portal page and seeing no activity in hours. I think it could be different with a little less of the venom.
Save the venom for your scripts.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 4th, 2012, 5:06pm; Reply: 60
I agree with scaring away new members and plenty people have left over the years because of it.
When it comes to the OWC, this is just the beginning. Wait until the theme and genre is announced! That's when things really start to get rowdy around here. Then wait until there are 40+ scripts submitted and it's revealed 20% of the writers are not member and didn't even bother to read any of the scripts! It's all part of it. ;D
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 4th, 2012, 5:36pm; Reply: 61
This site can be real slow sometimes, so my complaint isn't so much that everyone is harping on my "dumbass question," but the fact taht this is what keeps people from participating.
I don't think the "dumbass" was in reference to your question. I'm pretty sure it was in reference to the questions that will come after the genre/theme is announced. And just remember there are no dumb questions... so anyone who calls them dumb is merely reflecting.
Posted by: bert, October 4th, 2012, 5:55pm; Reply: 62
Quoted from mcornetto
And just remember there are no dumb questions...
Hate to disagree with one of my Moderator brethren...but this just ain't so :)
Don't sweat the so-called brawls. It is more like a really loud party that annoys the neighbors, but is mostly harmless.
Posted by: Felipe, October 4th, 2012, 6:05pm; Reply: 63
Oh, I've been here long enough to have gotten acquainted with Mr. Bush and some of the others. I can take it and I can see when things are said to instigate forum brawls.
I'm just not sure about the ones that are on the cusp of joining or join and leave after a week or after their first script is deemed unfit for toilet paper.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 4th, 2012, 8:29pm; Reply: 64
Hate to disagree with one of my Moderator brethren...but this just ain't so :)
Then perhaps you might provide a list of examples of what you think are dumb questions so that people who might have those questions know whether to ask them or not.
Posted by: bert, October 4th, 2012, 8:50pm; Reply: 65
Quoted from mcornetto
Then perhaps you might provide a list of examples of what you think are dumb questions so that people who might have those questions know whether to ask them or not.
Posted by: jwent6688, October 4th, 2012, 9:57pm; Reply: 66
Hot damn! Even the mods are mixing it up! This OWC will be epic!
Seriously you two, set an example. That is all.
James
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 4th, 2012, 10:20pm; Reply: 67
Felipe, and anyone else that felt offended by my comments - this was not intended directly at anyone. It is a general statement and as said, it will occur again and again once more info is released
In no way was I or would I eve try and run someone off or scare someone off.
As my little joke question post poked fun at questions that will most likely actually arise. Personally, I don't understand where such questions could possibly come from, but trust me,m they will come and come again.
Just as a word of warning, the more questions that are asked, the more rigid the requirements become. My advice? Don't ask questions. Write your entry so that it falls within whatever boundaries The Don dolls out. Quite simple, actually. If someone or everyone doesn't think you followed the challenge rules, so be it.
Most importantly, have fun with it, because that's what it's all about. Think outside the box and put your best foot forward. I'm gonna attempt to put all 3 of my feet forward here.
Sorry if anyone took my words in a way they were not intended. I apologize right here and now.
Posted by: DarrenJamesSeeley, October 4th, 2012, 11:17pm; Reply: 68
I'd bastardize it into a horror romcom. Two sociopath mutants go out on a date. Love tryst between vampire & werewolf. Dr Frankenstein makes love to his monster. And then they switch.
I can work with it.
One of the ghouls should be a new mummy, knocked up by the Gill Man ;D Sorry, couldn't resist.
Posted by: danbotha, October 5th, 2012, 1:46am; Reply: 69
Quoted from Dreamscale
As my little joke question post poked fun at questions that will most likely actually arise. Personally, I don't understand where such questions could possibly come from, but trust me,m they will come and come again.
There's always going to be the newbies who have no idea what's going on. Every right to poke fun of us for asking the stupid questions. I'm sure all the veterans get a little sick of it... ;D
Posted by: ReneC, October 5th, 2012, 2:04am; Reply: 70
You see what happens when we don't have any OWCs? Everyone's all twitchy and hot under the collar, all bent out of shape. You see, Mr. Tamborine Man, we need our jingle-jangle to keep us all sane. You gots ta keep the animals fed or you start losing tourists at the zoo!
Posted by: RayW, October 5th, 2012, 12:28pm; Reply: 71
I'm offended that you're offended. I'm a victim! It's my hope and dream that the entertainment industry would promote and encourage new fodder for the machine so that there would be EVEN MORRRRRE content of dubious merit.
Your story is in here. Somewhere. --->
Didn't someone around here recently state that something to the effect of "Just because your screenplay was turned down doesn't mean it sucked. It just means it wasn't excellent. It might be good. But not excelllent."
Posted by: Steex, October 5th, 2012, 1:21pm; Reply: 72
I agree. We do tend to be harsh. Especially with newbies and scripts we find childish. I'm not innocent. But I try to be nice.
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 5th, 2012, 6:37pm; Reply: 73
Come on Don...give us a little hint *smile*
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 6:45pm; Reply: 74
Yes!! The natives are obviously restless. Let's just frickin' kick it off early as a pre-Halloween surprise from a bog old sneering Jack-O-Lantern.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 5th, 2012, 6:55pm; Reply: 75
I like the impromptu one we did in Feb -06. Any genre. No dialogue! 8)
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 5th, 2012, 7:00pm; Reply: 76
Would be great practice ...no dialogue.
In between projects and I'm hoping to do a short :)
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 7:07pm; Reply: 77
No dialogue and a pitch black screen. Nothing but sound effects for 10-12 pages that tells a riveting story with deep character arcs.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 5th, 2012, 7:09pm; Reply: 78
You should be able to tell your story without words...
Good practice. especially for dialogue heavy writers.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 7:14pm; Reply: 79
2 mutes in a fake looking cheap cardboard room on 2 chairs have a conversation and the themes and deep meanings resonate throughout the world.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 5th, 2012, 7:16pm; Reply: 80
Whatever Jeff......Don't drown.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 7:19pm; Reply: 81
Huh? ;D ;D ;D ;D I'm about to make my second drink of the night. No drowning over here...yet...
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 5th, 2012, 7:28pm; Reply: 82
YOU can express mail a bottle to me :) ...no need to drown :)
Pia ...you throw him a life ring while I steal his liquor ;) haha
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 7:39pm; Reply: 83
# 2 went down pretty quickly. #3 is on deck.
Could be about time for the first Jagie of the evening. Free UFC Heavyweight fight right around the corner. GO BIGFOOT!!!!! Take that giant Hawaiian down!!!
Posted by: M.Alexander, October 5th, 2012, 7:53pm; Reply: 84
Free UFC? Where?
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 5th, 2012, 7:55pm; Reply: 85
FX Bigfoot VS Brown ;)
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 7:57pm; Reply: 86
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 5th, 2012, 8:52pm; Reply: 93
Thanks for sharing Michael...
And now I'm thinking...I want to take part in that. Anything magical, count me in. Quite beautiful :)
Posted by: Steex, October 5th, 2012, 9:08pm; Reply: 94
How about instead of no dialogue, we do no action?
10-12 page monologue? ...on anything magical. :)
Posted by: RayW, October 5th, 2012, 10:07pm; Reply: 95
Can I just toss in a token image or brief reference to the theme like they do in 48hr Film Fests or does the story have to be replete with it?
I vote for the double genre of epic short. Theme - Fluffing. (Go ahead and make that a GLBT fluffing if you want. It might be entertaining.)
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 5th, 2012, 10:40pm; Reply: 96
I vote for the theme to include at least 1 syllable and the letter A, E, X, or M.
Bonus points for references to wings shaped like arrows.
Posted by: alffy, October 6th, 2012, 10:04am; Reply: 97
I've heard a rumour that the OWC is going to be a 10-12 page Romantic Comedy with Horror, involving a Werewolf, set on a ship in the woods and with no dialogue but is a monologue. Sounds pretty straight forward to me.
Posted by: Gage, October 6th, 2012, 10:37am; Reply: 98
How about an abstract piece: no words allowed. Only numbers.
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, October 6th, 2012, 10:43am; Reply: 99
I am praying that, when all is said and done, this is NOT a no dialogue script. You cannot take away the only thing I don't completely suck at. That's just... not even cool. At all.
Posted by: Steex, October 6th, 2012, 11:31pm; Reply: 100
We should have to write it in binary code. 1010110110001101001001101
Posted by: RayW, October 7th, 2012, 7:45am; Reply: 101
Combatants... er... I mean "contestants" might consider doing a little produced and appreciated short film homework: http://www.shortoftheweek.com/films/
Posted by: DaveTroop, October 7th, 2012, 9:26am; Reply: 102
Let me get this straight.
You tell me what to do. You tell me I have a week to do it. Then after I do it, you ridicule and berate me.
I'm in!
I do this all the time. It's called being married.
Posted by: M.Alexander, October 7th, 2012, 9:55am; Reply: 103
Code
FADE IN:
EXT. __________ - DAY
__________(30's) gets out of a_________, then looks around.
He sees ___________ (40's) run towards him. He pulls out a gun and fires a SHOT.
___________ head explodes.
___________(20's) runs out of a __________ screaming.
__________
Get in!
They hop into the __________.
INT. _____________ - NIGHT
___________ starts up the___________and drives off.
___________
Thank God you came along!
___________
What was that thing?
___________
It was a ____________
____________
Well, it's a dead___________now.
_________ points at the road ahead.
____________
Look out!
__________ cranks the ________.
EXT. _________ - NIGHT
The __________ swerves off the road and smashes into a __________.
I've already written my OWC. All I gotta do is fill in the blanks once the theme is announced.
Posted by: Mr. Blonde, October 7th, 2012, 10:56am; Reply: 104
It would be very interesting to, one day, do a Mad Libs-style OWC. See how different people can get within a set skeleton...
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 7th, 2012, 1:33pm; Reply: 105
Stands next to Cinemachado armed with a giant fire extinguisher...I got your back, man!
Posted by: leitskev, October 8th, 2012, 5:43pm; Reply: 113
Felipe, I think one benefit to it being open is that it gets new people involved. That's how Dena started, and many others. I think the OWC is a gateway to the site for many.
I think we usually get 35 to 45 scripts for Halloween. This is just my second, so I could be wrong.
It's a lot to read, but you don't have to read them all.
The first couple of days, I try to read the ones no has read yet, or not many have. But then as it gets later in the week, I tend to skip those with a low read number. You reach a point where you want to read the ones that are easy to read.
Try to read the ones that stir up discussion or get a ton of reads before you vote.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 8th, 2012, 5:43pm; Reply: 114
Adventure films bring in the most revenue, but are cost prohibitive to produce with action films likewise right behind them.
But horror, classic SS Oct OWC fare, is relatively not much more expensive to shoot/produce than drama while bringign in a decent return on investment.
Ergo... SS Oct OWC: Horror is quite popular to bring the bugs outta the woodwork. And we wanna see alllll the flavors of bugs we can!
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 8th, 2012, 6:11pm; Reply: 116
If the problem with a horror OWC is that too many people enter, wouldn't it be better to not allow non-members to participate?
Think of it like you're a Nazi. The final solution. Mmmm. Okay maybe not. Ban Gypsies. No entries by single mothers. Or homosexuals. I can always tell the ones written by gay men anyway.
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 8th, 2012, 7:42pm; Reply: 118
I say the more the merrier! Last year :) this is the ONLY way I ever would have finished a screenplay at all. Here's how it went.
-Wow there's a contest! -Now how do I do this? -I try. -Then start getting feedback WTH these people must hate me. -WTF? You mean I gotta actually work here and read other work??? Felt like I signed up for some BDSM meetup group :) *teasin* -OMG I am learning! -These people are my mentors, teachers and friends! -I love this shit! I can't get enough! *sings --- Hurt so good..come on baby make it hurt so good*
haha ;) so...unleash the kraken! And let's get down to business :) Celebrating my one year anniversary!!!
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 8th, 2012, 8:06pm; Reply: 119
unleash the kraken! And let's get down to business :) Celebrating my one year anniversary!!!
Right on! Exactly.
Dena, was I nice like I usually am on the feedback I left you for your first OWC? I bet I was...
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 8th, 2012, 8:08pm; Reply: 120
OMG I was more scared of you than anyone Jeff! Honest :)
But I grew to like the beatings! No pain..no gain, right??
Posted by: leitskev, October 8th, 2012, 8:11pm; Reply: 121
I remember people were really getting on her about not reviewing in the OWC. That's when I first talked to her.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 8th, 2012, 8:12pm; Reply: 122
Huh? Moi? :o :o :o :o :o
That doesn't sound like me at all, Dena Yellow Pale...not at all.
Wait till you all see how nice the new me is. Every script that enters is already a big winner just for entering. Uh huh...oh no...I don't know if I can be only nice in my feedback.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 8th, 2012, 8:13pm; Reply: 123
Another day closer....damn this feels like a long wait.
A very long wait indeed... oh well, at least there is all this idle chatter to keep peeps busy and entertained.
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 8th, 2012, 8:53pm; Reply: 129
I won't take part. I'm just cranky like that!
Posted by: nawazm11, October 8th, 2012, 10:44pm; Reply: 130
Yeah, the reason I started writing was because I saw the OWC on the front page while looking for a script. It would be a shame to not let new writers join the site.
Posted by: Steex, October 8th, 2012, 11:22pm; Reply: 131
The first feedback I ever got was pretty brutal. But I loved it! That's the only way I learn. People generally know what they are doing right, but oblivious to the things they suck at.
I can't wait for the OWC!!!
Posted by: Felipe, October 8th, 2012, 11:55pm; Reply: 132
Quoted from Dreamscale
Sometimes that Felipe can be a real bully, you know.
I'll just take that as a reference to my last OWC. =D
Anyway, I'm not saying people shouldn't be allowed to join, but if we made people join in order to participate, we'd be getting new members and, who knows, maybe they'd stick around if Jeff was nice enough.
Posted by: danbotha, October 9th, 2012, 12:35am; Reply: 133
That would be a real challenge... Should have brushed up on my Shakespeare ages ago...
Posted by: Felipe, October 9th, 2012, 12:42am; Reply: 134
Don used the same "a drum, a drum" thing in the last OWC, so I don't think it's indicative of the theme.
Posted by: Hugh Hoyland, October 9th, 2012, 8:26am; Reply: 135
I thought my first OWC was the October 2010.
It was actually the Feb 2011 OWC (kinda horror themed).
Dang I aint been doing this as long as I thought. lol
Posted by: RayW, October 9th, 2012, 9:52am; Reply: 136
Quoted from mcornetto
The October OWC isn't always horror.
I always adore absolutes! They're so... DEFINITIVE!
I promise, on my living mother's grave, that I will write and submit, no matter what the given genre and theme are, my entry a horror.
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 9th, 2012, 1:52pm; Reply: 137
I think the challenge should be called, "Hug a transvestite!"
Any genre, any time period, just needs a transvestite called Gerald, ok the name is optional.
Maybe you could earn an extra bonus point if, within the script, you are able to include his nick name, Clever Dick. :o :o :o
Oh the possibilities...
Ps this better start soon before the really weird ideas start coming out.
Posted by: stevie, October 9th, 2012, 2:42pm; Reply: 138
It's now Wednesday the 10th here in Oz, so technically the OWC is on, baby!
I've created my own:
GENRE - Horror
THEME - Jeff Bush's bedroom
Ok, there's a few rules and things that need to be adhered to...
The bedroom can depicted as a 'normal' room, though in Jeff's world, this might not be possible. A dungeon type setup is ok. Extra points given if it resembles a bathroom in a gay night club.
A cast of three characters must be used. One can be in a wheelchair, that's optional. One must be a heroic Aussie guy, extremely well - hung, who has come to rescue the others from Jeff's deviant clutches.
STRICTLY NO FEMALES! This is a horror story not a fucking fantasy - why would there be chicks in Jeff's bedroom? Come on people, get with the program. An animal is permitted and doesn't count towards the cast list. More kudos gained if the said animal is furry and has a limb missing ( three legged llamas rule!). Also this creature must be able to withstand sexual advances made from any character who is an Arizonian.
The script can be set in any time period from now to say, March next year. Bonus points if you have a copy of USA Today visible, dated February 2013, with the headline, 'Niners Win 6th Super Bowl'...
At least 4 Beatles albums must be seen in the said room. If you can make them Abbey Road, the White Album and Revolver, well, it's all damn good. Huge high five if one of your characters is named Ringo...
That's about it for now. Good luck to all who enter and start writing!
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 9th, 2012, 3:09pm; Reply: 139
I reckon it is, Pia. I always thought Ray was a quad.
Posted by: Steex, October 9th, 2012, 10:54pm; Reply: 149
More waiting!?!?!?! I think I'm going to explode.
Of course, I have the next two days off. I was so looking forward to two straight days of writing... :(
Posted by: alffy, October 10th, 2012, 1:43am; Reply: 150
Could have a day off on Friday so time to write.....
I've a feeling there will be a lot of scripts entered as everyone seems to be itching for this. I know Stevie must be itching, what with 1600 crabs crawling around in his under carriage. :)
Ray, you're images and videos disturb me. I wonder what the hell your script will do? lol
Posted by: George Willson, October 10th, 2012, 6:45am; Reply: 151
He's just giving extra time to work up your iambic pentameter so you can write your Shakespearean OWC entry correctly. If your entry contains a monologue, it must be in sonnet form. Remember the rhyme scheme: ABABCDCDEFEFGG.
Posted by: ReneC, October 10th, 2012, 10:39am; Reply: 152
Thanks, George. That's going to be in my head all day.
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 10th, 2012, 2:40pm; Reply: 153
God, the wait was long before this!!
And i made time in the next two days to write, instead i'm away with my wife this weekend. She's going to love me and my iPad and new Final draft app....not.
Posted by: Felipe, October 10th, 2012, 2:48pm; Reply: 154
Divorce and loneliness is a writer's best friend.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 10th, 2012, 3:07pm; Reply: 155
To that list, I'd like to add vodka and Jagermeister.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 10th, 2012, 3:43pm; Reply: 156
Here's a little something to get you all in the mood for the Shakespearean OWC...
INT. CASTLE - DAY
Stone predominates the setting, tapestries add flavour.
In the high ceiling foyer, one sword slashes down only to be stopped by another. PADOGMA belongs to the first sword and AROMAGIO belongs to the second.
AROMAGIO Where didst thou learn to fight, a nunnery?
The tension on the swords is palpable. Padogma grunts with effort.
PADOGMA Tis a shame that a steel rod prevents thou from meeting your truest destiny.
AROMAGIO And what would that be, one of your kisses?
PADOGMA A kiss of steel that makes you twins.
AROMAGIO I already have twice the fight as thou.
And the swords ring as Aromagio rolls away, then stands. Padogma's sword touches the floor with a clink.
AROMAGIO And twice the speed. Pity thou aren't younger.
Padogma give chase, his sword raised, one arm raise behind him for balance.
PADOGMA Younger than thou and I would need mother's teat.
AROMAGIO Then a pity I'm not younger.
PADOGMA In a moment sir, thou wilt not worry of thine age.
He slashes at Aromagio but Aromagio hops back. He raises his sword in time to catch Padogma's blade on it's return.
AROMAGIO Because victory is ageless.
PADOGMA Victory? For you? Only if thou dreams of it.
AROMAGIO Then quickly, bring me the fluffy pillows so that we might begin our Good. Night's. Sleep.
In a deft move Aromagio disarms Padogma. Then using his sword he flings Padogma's sword a short distance away. He holds the tip of his sword against Padogma's neck. Padogma flinches as a small drop of blood forms at the point.
AROMAGIO Methinks I've one point now but thou hast none.
PADOGMA A small setback, nothing less, nothing more.
AROMAGIO Twould be more if my point had been deeper?
PADOGMA Our fortune then that you are most shallow.
AROMAGIO Thou jests?! When I could easily end it.
Aromagio tenses with rising anger, Padogma closes his eyes. QUEYNTELLA calls from above.
Yeah. It's more like being gang raped in a Columbian prison.
boy, that made me laugh!!!!
and for those newbies, i have a feeling this will be a little more gentle than the previous ones, don't know why. Oh yes i do, jeff's got a job and is back in california.
Posted by: George Willson, October 12th, 2012, 6:54am; Reply: 167
Michael, whilst thy scene appeareth to be in the Shakespearean way, it leaveth much to be desired. Thy grasp of the grammar of the bard is not quite up to par. One cannot help but notice that thou usest the words thou and you most indiscriminately. By my usage of thou, I speak to thee as a friend, whereupon should I choose to use you, I would speak to thee as an acquaintance or as a servant to his master. Such was the influence of the French. If I might also venture upon another point of contention, thine usage of the verbs showeth to me that thou needst more study upon the subject. To be fair, by the time of Shakespeare, the people used you and thou most indiscriminately as well, so perhaps the fault lieth not upon thee. And the verb conjugations are now quite archaic in English but alive and well in German.
Posted by: mcornetto (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 7:15am; Reply: 168
Clearly it was meant as a bit of fun, George.
It's a rough draft I wrote for Movie Poet several years ago but abandoned for another story. I didn't even realize the story was finished until I checked it after all the talk of Shakespeare in this thread. I thought people might be amused by it, so I posted it. I was certainly amused by it.
Taking it to a final draft point and clearing up the iambic as well as language issues. I don't think so. It's a silly little skit that no one would likely produce.
Thanks for taking the time to comment on it.
Posted by: bert, October 12th, 2012, 8:28am; Reply: 169
Quoted from mcornetto
Screwest thou!
Posted by: RayW, October 12th, 2012, 8:36am; Reply: 170
OCT OWC 2012: Horror Romantic Dramedy. - Shakespearean prison rape meant to be funny but over ANALized and is now not funny. At all.
"Nay! For I have not the purse for thine sausage, sir!" "Oh, thou lusty little new cellmate twink. Do not challenge your bull master to a game of hide and seek, for I know you've not one but TWO purses for the sausages of those to whom I owe many gambling debts!" "Beg pardon as I make hard flatus in mine trousers." "The perfume of beast with two backs offal excites mines kinsmen as much as your dewy man-boy perspiration!"
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 9:50am; Reply: 171
and for those newbies, i have a feeling this will be a little more gentle than the previous ones, don't know why. Oh yes i do, jeff's got a job and is back in california.
Jeff is back in AZ, not CA. Jeff's also had back trouble all week, which makes him very grumpy. Jeff was also awakened last night by a frickin' hail storm with thunder and lightning ripping the night apart.
Good thing the OWC hasn't started yet.
Posted by: George Willson, October 12th, 2012, 10:22am; Reply: 172
Quoted from mcornetto
Clearly it was meant as a bit of fun, George.
Ditto.
Posted by: Reef Dreamer, October 12th, 2012, 1:42pm; Reply: 173
Quoted from Dreamscale
Jeff is back in AZ, not CA. Jeff's also had back trouble all week, which makes him very grumpy. Jeff was also awakened last night by a frickin' hail storm with thunder and lightning ripping the night apart.
Good thing the OWC hasn't started yet.
Ok,the bets are off.
For some reason I thought you were in CA, my bad. I've flew into Phoenix once, and then drove down to some place like Bisbee, sound right? But thats a different story and a different thread.
All the best everyone with this, glad the genre etc is declared tonight, I just Don doesn't get too prescriptive and there is a degree of freedom.
Here's to two weeks of roller coaster
Cheers
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 12th, 2012, 1:51pm; Reply: 174
It's 82 and gorgeous outside. I'm sitting poolside with a beer writing a fight scene. Life is good...I'll be tipsy by the time the OWC is announced. Bring it on!
Cheers!! 8)
DRUNKEN SKYPE-FEST!!!!
YEAH!!! ;D
Let me know if anyone wants to get on tonight......
Shawn.....><
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 5:10pm; Reply: 185
You mean like drinking alcohol? Isn't that bad for you?
Posted by: irish eyes, October 12th, 2012, 5:52pm; Reply: 186
I write all my best shit that way :D
Mark
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 6:02pm; Reply: 187
Yeah, I guess I have to admit it's like that for me as well.
Oh check it out...it's about time to start drinking for the weekend!!! Hooray!!!
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 6:12pm; Reply: 188
Jeff, you fuzzy headed indigent...
Of course it’s bad for ya.
The best things in life usually are.
Take for instance…
Huffing Freon
Illegal midget tossing (That’s when they don’t wear a helmet)
Nose picking. It’s not really bad for you but it’s damm sure fun
Midnight Dutch ovens and Cleveland steamers
Heck Jeff, without things such as synthetic weed and bath salts to entice us to eat each others faces off, why would life be worth living…
I ask you, WHY???
I say DRINK UP…
TO DRUKEN SKYPE-FEST…
Shawn…..><
Posted by: DarrenJamesSeeley, October 12th, 2012, 6:36pm; Reply: 189
I won't be drunk I drink Pumpkin sprce coffee. I'll be on Skype later this evening. probably 10pm on, EST
DarrenJSeeley87
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 6:39pm; Reply: 190
CAPTAIN MORGAN'S long island iced tea for me!!!!
Get in ma belly....
Yum!!
Shawn.....><
*** Darren,
Just sent you a request on Skype...
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 6:45pm; Reply: 191
Shawn, you fucknut. I'm imbibing as well...ain't that a shocker?
Posted by: Grandma Bear, October 12th, 2012, 6:46pm; Reply: 192
Beer is my poison...and Ben Franklin was 100% right! ;D
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 12th, 2012, 6:49pm; Reply: 193
Tonight my poison is Mikes hard punch ;) I know whimp *smile*
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 6:52pm; Reply: 194
I have multiple poisons invading my body already...
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 6:53pm; Reply: 195
Quoted from Ledbetter
*** Darren,
Just sent you a request on Skype...
Darren, watch out. Shawn's been known to try and elicit sex online from young boys all the way up to old men. Be careful...
Posted by: DaveTroop, October 12th, 2012, 6:56pm; Reply: 196
While everyone is hung over tomorrow morning and vomiting on themselves... I will be writing.
When you are lying in bed cursing the morning sun... I will be writing.
When everyone's head feels like it is being slammed into a brick wall... I will be writing.
(Insert evil laugh here.)
Posted by: CoopBazinga, October 12th, 2012, 6:57pm; Reply: 197
My poison was red wine last night – its bright and early here so coffee all the way. Although lunchtime can’t quick enough, it’s not only when the OWC is announced but also beer-o-clock. ;D
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 7:10pm; Reply: 198
C'mon hurry up.. I can't hold my purple headed warrior much longer....
Oh shit... this is simply scripts... i thought i was on jizz shots
Mark
I also think I reconize you from bearly legal canadian run away pre-teens .com
Am I wrong?
Shawn....><
Posted by: ABennettWriter, October 12th, 2012, 8:12pm; Reply: 213
Sex trafficking isn't funny.
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 8:15pm; Reply: 214
You ever have sex on a freeway?
I have and it's hilarious.
Shawn.....><
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 8:15pm; Reply: 215
Yeah, you guys. Let's keep it clean, alright? Geez...some people...
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 12th, 2012, 8:17pm; Reply: 216
I think they put too much alcohol in the beer.
Posted by: ABennettWriter, October 12th, 2012, 8:24pm; Reply: 217
I don't get the point of non-alcoholic beer. Beer usually tastes like shit to begin with and only gets better when you're drunk.
Posted by: irish eyes, October 12th, 2012, 8:25pm; Reply: 218
Quoted from shawn
You ever have sex on a freeway?
I have and it's hilarious.
Sounds painful :D
Mark
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 12th, 2012, 8:30pm; Reply: 219
No beer for me!!!!
DON give us some hints!!!!
I'm typsy :) gonna be passed out before the clock strikes 12 ...my coach will turn into a punkin...and that damn slipper will fall off again somewhere ....story of my life!
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 8:30pm; Reply: 220
So far as Irish eyes goes...
You cant teach an upper new Yorker anything...
That's what I dig about 'em
BTW, Jeff...
The whole..Gee guy's, can we please keep it clean
comming from you
sounds alot like a Scout Master saying...
you're son is safe with me on this 5 day camping trip...
You're the dirtiest of the bunch...
and I respect you for it.
Shawn.....><
Posted by: ABennettWriter, October 12th, 2012, 8:31pm; Reply: 221
I will just be getting home from work around midnight.
And I have so much homework to do, too, but I'll fit in it.
Posted by: irish eyes, October 12th, 2012, 8:36pm; Reply: 222
I hope the genre romantic comedy with Meg Ryan and Tom Hanks as your leads... There just aint enough of those :)
Mark
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 8:40pm; Reply: 223
Yes, Shawn, you A-Hole, I was obviously fucking around.
We need a hint...something with Christopher Lee's voice in a V.O. Please!!!
Posted by: irish eyes, October 12th, 2012, 8:42pm; Reply: 224
Quoted from jeff
We need a hint...something with Christopher Lee's voice in a V.O. with Meg Ryan and Tom Hanks Please!!!
Good for you Jeff :D
Mark
Posted by: ABennettWriter, October 12th, 2012, 8:47pm; Reply: 225
But only if we can go back in time and use the cute, young Meg and Tom.
I don't like Old Meg an Old Tom.
Posted by: Dreamscale (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 8:51pm; Reply: 226
I'd take old Meg for a spin...
I bet Shawn would be all over old or young Tom.
;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D
The natives are drunk and restless...oh no///
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 9:11pm; Reply: 227
Quoted from Dreamscale
I'd take old Meg for a spin...
Meg could be on a gurney at the morgue, Jeff and you would still fancy a spin...
Shawn.....><
Posted by: irish eyes, October 12th, 2012, 9:11pm; Reply: 228
Old Meg isn't looking too good these days
:D:D:D
Mark
Posted by: Pale Yellow, October 12th, 2012, 9:17pm; Reply: 229
That is scaring me Mark ;)
Posted by: Ledbetter (Guest), October 12th, 2012, 9:18pm; Reply: 230