Band Together by James Edwards - Series, Comedy - Sitcom following two buskers who recruit for and start a new band.  37 pages - doc, format 8)

Hi James

Your format is way off, try using some free software like trelby or Celtix.

You had no slugs.
INT.   is not a slug and it comes after Fade in not before.

INT. LONDON UNDERPASS - DAY is an example

The opening description/action is 3 lines too long and it tells me nothing about the main characters Carl and Donny.

Read a lot of scripts on here and participate and it will pay off.

If you have any questions you can pm me

Mark