The Hunted by Dena McKinnon (pale yellow) - Thriller - An animal rights activist is injured during a protest, and in an aggressive attempt at revenge...the hunters become the hunted. - pdf, format 8)

You guys...WARNING....I wrote this script literally over a weekend...so you may not want to read :) I'm just putting my work out there.

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It won't open.

It opens for me.

I was going to read one of yours Dena. I started with Quarantine Island, but haven't really had the time to finish yet. Which script would you care more about to get feedback on?

I don't like Dropbox.  Tried using it once last year and my new PC crashed the next day.  Any way you could just straight upload it to simplyscripts rather than through Dropbox?

The amazing Dena returns with yet another feature script!  Dena...how do you do it, girl?

Have I read this one?

Lon, I completely agree with you about Dropbox.  I don't and won't use it either.

Quoted from Grandma Bear I was going to read one of yours Dena. I started with Quarantine Island, but haven't really had the time to finish yet. Which script would you care more about to get feedback on?

Pia ...you don't have to read them...waste of time. These are early works...just want to get them out there ya know...if you are bored and have nothing else to do :) then open any of them up....doesn't matter which to me.

Quoted from Dreamscale The amazing Dena returns with yet another feature script!  Dena...how do you do it, girl? Have I read this one? Lon, I completely agree with you about Dropbox.  I don't and won't use it either.

Jeff...this is the one I wrote over that weekend. I think I forced you to read for me :) long ago...not sure if you read the whole thing or just first act.

The one with the big game hunting preserve?

Yes that's the one :)

Skinning Yard...blah blah :)

I've been using Dropbox for a couple of years and its fine! Works on my IPad and all. Must be your computers that don't gel with it, lol

Dena, I'll give this a read this week. I read QI and posted a tiny review but you must've missed it.

I should be working on Fort Hell but am sidetracked by an Angry Birds addiction. Gotta get those 3 stars!! Lol

Fort Hell - YES!!!!

Angry Birds - NO!!!!!

The Hunted - YES!!!!!!

Hi Dena

I have a serious question(shocking)

The hunted finished at 74 pages.

What exactly does 74 pages fall under?

It's too short for a movie
Too long for a short
Too long for a one hour drama.

and I promise i'm being serious, not a smartass :)

Mark

Quoted from irish eyes Hi Dena I have a serious question(shocking) The hunted finished at 74 pages. What exactly does 74 pages fall under? It's too short for a movie Too long for a short Too long for a one hour drama. and I promise i'm being serious, not a smartass :) Mark

Throw in some mimes and a T-Rex chase. That should bring it up to a workable 90  ;D

Quoted from Stevie Throw in some mimes and a T-Rex chase. That should bring it up to a workable 90

Now that's what i'm talking about :D

Mark

LOL YOu guys crack me up....

Stevie!!!! OMG I'm stuck with a Plants vs Zombies addiction! haha....thank you thank you for review...I need to go back through them all :)

WARNING ...HUNTED is not good....three day challenge :) for myself. ;)

17 posts on the thread and not a single piece of feedback.

Are these posts helping you with this one, Dena Marie?   ;D ;D ;D

Yes Jeff...I've learned a ton! Like...not to try to write a feature in one weekend :) haha....why does it feel like Friday?

It's always Friday in my world!

Cuz you are spoiled :) Skype tomorrow night or you gotta hot date(or three)?

No Skype, no dates, no hot dates, no mermaids.

I've got friends in from CA and we're going to Cactus League Spring Training baseball games each day, and partying each night.  The ride stops Sunday.