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Posted by: Don, March 15th, 2013, 3:41pm
Life After...: Pilot by Christian Turner - Drama - 3 best friends and recent college grads enter adulthood at full speed and go down 3 very different paths to find out who they are in this coming of age drama. In the pilot, Andrew begins his dream job (of sorts) at Rolling Stone, Sam receives some surprising news from his ex, and Nick surprises everyone when he proposes to his girlfriend.  - fdx, format 8)
Posted by: insider901, March 15th, 2013, 4:29pm; Reply: 1
You have monster problem with the formatting. It's scrambled on my screen.
Posted by: Don, March 15th, 2013, 4:39pm; Reply: 2

Quoted from insider901
You have monster problem with the formatting. It's scrambled on my screen.


This is in final draft.  If you don't have final draft viewer, it will look scrambled.

Don
Posted by: danbotha, March 15th, 2013, 4:51pm; Reply: 3

Quoted from Don


This is in final draft.  If you don't have final draft viewer, it will look scrambled.



I have final draft and it still looks like something you might give to a computer programmer. Am I downloading it correctly??

Dan
Posted by: dogglebe (Guest), March 15th, 2013, 5:43pm; Reply: 4
I'm seeing the same thing.


Phil
Posted by: AmbitionIsKey, March 16th, 2013, 1:38pm; Reply: 5
Same.  All I can see is messed up, like coding or something.  No pilot.

Regardless, the log-line could use work.

I think you need to change the numbers "3" to "three."

Also, do you plan on sharing the entire series with us?  If so you should change the log-line to an entire series log-line, and not just a log-line for the Pilot.

Anyways, hope this gets fixed.  The story is something that interests me!

-- Curt


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