The Cosmic by Pete Barry - Action, Adventure - A superhero, left insane from a cataclysmic battle, discovers himself relegated to an asylum with the very villains he once fought.  Now he must stop the inmates from unleashing an alien horror upon the world – while his sense of reality continues to crumble. 119 pages - pdf, format 8)

Pete,
Nice script!  Read 18 pages so far.  I'm not too into commenting on technique and all.  Mostly story.  However, your script caught my attention and just the fact that i want -- need! -- to read more says it all about your technique, as far as I'm concerned.  And just a quick search of your name leads me to believe you kinda know what you're doing!  Though I will comment that your action reads fluidly, and is not choppy, which I have noticed alot with some writers.  Not that choppy is bad, but a little short prose never hurt when done correctly.  Refreshing.
Anyway, love the premise of The Cosmic.  Very original.  Nice job.
Regards,
Steve