Pin by Jack Reher - Horror - Remake of the 1988 Pin - pdf, format 8)

Hi,

thatīs my first post here and english is not my first language, but i try my best..:))...so here is my belief about the script.

--on some points the action have to go further...


--the dialogue is sometimes not the best..(thatīs just me..)

--show us more thingīs ..we donīt need to get thingīs from dialogue..

I just reached page 4..


but under the dash...pretty ok..:)..go on...