Locust Field by Collins Okoye - Thriller - The seemingly normal life of an English upper-middle class family becomes unhinged by a series of disturbing events, forcing the head of the family, Richard, to confront a mysterious woman who claims to be the victim of a past wrongdoing by him. 121 pages - pdf, format 8)

"A GAPING MOUTH, tongue drooping over lower lip, saliva kept
to a minimum by ejectors, steel wire fastened around teeth
by latexed fingers.
RICHARD BAINES, Berkshire County’s finest and only dentist,
has done this procedure a million times and it shows.
He never fails to create an environment that enables parents
such as MR and MRS. STEVENS to feel at ease as their dearest
daughter EMILY goes under the dental knife for some braces.
Moments later, the procedure comes to an end and FLORA, his
long-serving nurse, adjusts the dental chair to an upright
position."


This is a short story. You won't get many reviews till you learn how to properly structure a screenplay.

I think this is awell written script, keeps you tight to the pages and i celebrate the nightmare shot where the the mother find out her daughter nude in the bathroom. how well link the subconscious with the dark misdeed she has committed with the stalker and half sister. and there is a nuance of that movie in the eighties 'cape fear' with Robert de Niro. from the teacher waylaying emma at the musical studio
Collins i'd like to exchange my script with you: thriller tittled: 'On The Road.'
Bests.