Power in Words by Robert L. McBride - Short, Drama - A sarcastic comment changes the lives of a young woman and her two best friends. 8 pages - pdf, format 8)

This was an easy read.

The only problems I have are:

• Gina is 21.  Not a teenager as described in the log line.
  
• I would have liked more description for the girls to distinguish them from one another.
  
• If someone's heart "literally breaks into pieces" they would die.
  

I guess the moral of the story is to always keep eggs in the car with you, not in the trunk.  Tragic.

Jordan