Goodbye Tomorrow / The Hard Goodbye by Keenan Bedenfield - Drama - Love is redemption when a drug deal goes bad and an ex-marine finds himself once again in the middle of a world of violence.  81 pages - doc, format 8)

OK, this looks good. Some newbie issues with writing... but you write well. Writing for the screen is a separate skill.

You need to do some things though before I can read this. The first is convert the file into a .pdf. The second is take out all of the camera angles. I don't like reading those and it isn't normal for spec writers to do that.

It has a lot going for it though. Some good writing on display.