The Redemption of Omega 11001 by Gary Tao - Thriller - When a rogue group of black operatives stumble across alien technology under the Sea, only one soldier and his comrade have the caliber to locate and destroy it. With hazy pasts but once the world's best they discover it's all connected, and a matter of National Security. 126 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi All,

I would really appreciate it if someone could read this movie and tell me what they think.

Is it interesting overall ?

I gave this a whirl, and on the first few pages I encountered some minor problems.
1) You capitalize random words and sentences, it's a little distracting. I think you only capitalize names when they're first introduced and sound effects.
2)    Some of your descriptions could be shortened and made more succinct. ex. pg. 2 (An (LCD screen shows records of four high clearance government...)
3) It's not very polished, ROOF DOOR. Then below SWINGS OPEN.

I got to page 5, its not bad, congrats on completing the screenplay. Go through and read it aloud, edit and re-submit. You may have a great story to tell, but it won't be evident until this is polished a little.

Thanks, I will give it another read and make some changes.  Thanks.

Here is another review for it.

http://studios.amazon.com/reviews?entity_id=63507&entity_type_id=666503288