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Posted by: Don, July 23rd, 2014, 5:04pm
The Unveiling by LaDarrion Montel Williams - Drama - A father and son travel to New Orleans, seeking a normal life, only to discover that they've tripped upon a mecca of the supernatural. 61 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: LuisAnthony, July 28th, 2014, 1:27am; Reply: 1
Hi, I noticed the page count and wanted to give an opinion.

61 pages it too short for a feature film and too long for a short. Try to extend the story out as much as you can.

Don't push it either, having extra scenes that don't add anything to the story can be very annoying.

I have been there and sometimes it is very difficult to fill space but there's always a sub-plot or argument you could add to the story.

Good Luck.
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