The Justice League: Rise Of The Manhunters by Abdulnasir Imam - Sci Fi, Fantasy, Superhero - The formation of the Justice League in the aftermaths of the events of Man of Steel. 91 pages - pdf, format 8)

By the end of page 3 I am completely confused. Where the heck am I and what is going on? You jump from location to location, mention characters you don't describe so I have no idea who they are. Am I to simply know because it's the Justice League? The first one was boring so why would I want to see another (case in point there hasn't been another made - right?)? So change that.

Hey, I'm the screenwriter. I wish you'd read more of it (forgive the slightly bad formatting). You're right, I don't explain or describe who the characters are. Seeing as it's meant to be a sequel to Man of Steel, I was going off of fans of MoS and Justice League knowing who the characters are. What else couldn't get you pass the first 3 pages? The change of locations was to try and show each character as an individual set up for them. Thanks by the way, I need this to improve!

Hey, thanks for the reply. Every little bit helps for sure!