Juveniles to the First Degree by M. Alexander Garcia (Zander) - Short - A bad planned out idea that goes horribly wrong. 19 pages - pdf, format 8)

Logline needs some work I'm afraid and there's a bunch of typo's in the first few pages - e.g. thrown should be throne... To when you mean too, missing commas, etc.

I think this may be an early draft and it'd be better to fix the easy stuff and re-submit, you'll get more reads.

Anthony

Yeah... I should do that. Thanks :D