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Posted by: Don, September 5th, 2014, 8:09pm
Rise of the Slavs by Rimgaudas Pranas Kiliulis - Action, Adventure - Two village boys grow to mercenary scouts of the Goths and the Huns, and become the chieftains of the Sclaveni wolves in the harmony with their pagan deities and the beings of forests, swamps and steppes. 89 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), September 6th, 2014, 7:53am; Reply: 1
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The body burns. The Priest collects the ashes and spreads
them to the pit nearby. Dauritas’s mother cries and falls to
the pit embracing ashes. She wants to make a suicide by
cutting herself throat by a knife.



I get the feeling that English is your second language. A shame as I'd be very interested in reading a historically accurate story of this nature. My only other requirement is that it makes for an entertaining read. Having to step over bad English isn't my thing.
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