Just Too Scandelous by Angella Gallaher - Short - Just Too Scandalous is about three foster kids adopted by Wealthy Couple. 28 pages - pdf, format 8)

Angela,

There's errors in the logline, the script is formatted in Word, it's broken down into acts and scenes like a Stage Play, the action written in the past tense and loads more issues just from glancing at the first page. If you can't format the script properly you will have trouble getting anyone to read it and provide decent feedback.

I suggest reading up on screenplay writing and find some formatting software to help. There's plenty of tutorials and even some decent free software online, Google is your friend. There's also loads of produced, famous scripts available on this website alone. Have a read of them and you'll see where you are going wrong then try again.

All the best,

Mark