Home by Matthew Orobko - Drama - Young author Joel Miller has just published his first novel to unexpected success. His publisher and fans pressure him into a follow-up as he receives word that his brother has committed suicide. Upon arriving back to his hometown he reconnects with his family as well as his past friends in hopes to better understand his brother's actions as well as his own.  79 pages - pdf, format 8)

The logline needs serious work. At the moment it seems like you've told the whole story and not a lot really happens. 79 pages is also very short for a drama.

If you're around, I may even open the script and destroy your soul with a one action block technical review. At the moment though, I'm not feeling encouraged at all. Which is probably a good thing. Sometimes it really is far better to live in ignorance.