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Posted by: Don, November 22nd, 2014, 9:15am

It Could Happen to Anyone by Jason Myers - Short, Drama - Anti-gun control ad. 4 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: RichardR, December 8th, 2014, 10:43pm; Reply: 1

A bit over the top. No surprises, no reversals. The coyote is unnecessary, doesn't figure in the story even if it is a nice visual.

Best

Richard

Posted by: Zack, December 10th, 2014, 4:47pm; Reply: 2

Not sure what to make of this one. To be honest I was expecting a twist. And I don't understand the importance of the coyote. I know this is supposed to be an Anit-Gun Control ad, and for that it works. As a short story it is unexciting.

Good writing though.

~Zack~

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