Quoted Text found me? JAYMOND I’m surprised too. I lose my lunch here every day. Especially when I eat the cafeteria food with prune juice. And up it comes. |
Quoted Text JAYMOND (V.O.) I got to the rail station with plenty of time and even said g’day to this nice old man. EXT. SYDNEY TRAIN STATION – NIGHT The STATION MASTER, who should have retired years ago, blows a whistle. The train doors start closing as an exhausted Jaymond runs down the platform stairs, crashing into a MAN in his late sixties – nearly knocking him over. JAYMOND Sorry mate! |
Quoted Text But his eyes come to glaze at a body, lying in the aisle at the end of the carriage. |
Quoted Text HARRIET Bashed and robbed? Then, maybe I was – DR. TARNAWSKI No. Thankfully, you were not raped. Tears swell in Harriet’s eyes as she starts to cry. JAYMOND Harriet, don’t do that. You’re safe now. After all you’re in hospital. DR. TARNAWSKI I know, this is not an easy time for you. But the stronger you are, the faster you will recover. Look on the bright side - JAYMOND - Yeah some people have been in a coma for years. 8. (CONTINUED) DR. TARNAWSKI You’re alive and whoever did this didn’t break any of your bones. DR. TARNAWSKI CONT’D There’s no internal trauma and all of your scans indicate a clean bill of health. JAYMOND Hey Peter, aren’t there coma patients who wake up for an hour or two and drop back off again? DR. TARNAWSKI Now is not the best time for questions, Jaymond. We don’t want to upset her anymore than she already is. JAYMOND But I’ve heard that they talk, walk and even cry and they’re still in a coma? DR. TARNAWSKI Jaymond. JAYMOND She might still be in a coma for all we know. DR. TARNAWSKI Jaymond, hush. |
Quoted Text Out of the corner of his eye, Jaymond catches a SLIM MIDDLE AGED PROFESSIONALLY DRESSED WOMAN watching from the doorway. She waves to him and then walks away. |
Quoted Text A PHYSIO-THERAPIST, in his late twenties, is working closely with the two older women. |
Quoted Text MIDDLE EASTERN MAN We got a go. Contamination between suspect and hospital worker. |
Quoted Text HARRIET (Clinches her teeth) I just want to get out of here. I’ve spoken to the police, to the doctors, the nurses. And now we want to put me in the so called non-mental asylum trauma section of this hospital filled with other people like me who have experienced violent episodes. |
Quoted Text INT. HOSPITAL - PSYCHIATRIST’S OFFICE –- MORNING ANDREA BOLTON sits behind a desk. She is the SLIM MIDDLE AGED PROFESSIONALLY DRESSED WOMAN. There is a LOUD KNOCK. |
Quoted from AdrianWollaston He sees a woman laying in the aisle at the other end of the carriage. |
Quoted from LC Lie/lay is a pet peeve of mine. In this case it should be: lying, not laying, unless of course there are eggs involved. ;D Adrian, you seem to be having a quite industrious time commenting on screenplays but given a lot of (all, I think?) the scripts you're digging up are not from active members of the boards bear in mind your comments will probably fall on deaf ears. Yes, you can comment on whatever your heart fancies but it'd be nice too if you want to interact to use your reviewing skills on some of the regulars. Start with the Portal to see what's current, the 'Short' section and also Recent Posts. Or just ignore me if you wish... Welcome to SS, either way. :) |
Quoted from AdrianWollaston With regards to posting a script. I seem to have restricted access that only allows me to reply even though I am logged in. |