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Posted by: Don, December 21st, 2014, 12:34pm
The Third Button by R. Stiglic - Drama - A police officer doubts his fertility while he investigates a fatal car accident.  The father of deceased youngster, mad with the police officer, rapes and impregnates his wife, who keeps the truth for herself. 97 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), December 22nd, 2014, 7:19am; Reply: 1
Your English is very good... but not enough for it to go unnoticed. This has the result of making your writing read like a shopping list and it lacks the correct emotive nuances.

If you're not writing in a second language then I'd suggest reading novels as this will help you understand flow and sentence structure.
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