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Posted by: Don, December 21st, 2014, 4:25pm

X-men: Age of Mutants by Caesar - Sci Fi, Fantasy - The X-men are drawn back together when an ancient evil begins to awaken. 169 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: TonyDionisio, December 21st, 2014, 11:50pm; Reply: 1

Caesar,

FADE IN:

EXT. PYRAMIDS
A massive mutant stands on a hill, he’s gray eyes only reveal death.

169 pages is way too much. Your opening slug needs to include approx time of day.

Did you mean "his gray eyes"?

Gotta get simple things like this fixed.

Tony

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