What's happening?

My name Is Rick. I was born in Wyoming, raised in Southrn' Illinios, and reborn on the beaches of Jacksonville, Florida. I am 37 years young. An ex-Navy man. I now spend my days living a quiet country life. I'm very eclectic and cultured, but I love my low key, slow paced life.

I am new to this site for the most part. I've been interested in converting my novels into script form. I just dig the style of how scripts are written. It takes imagination to write and read them.

Films that I could watch anytime and that influence my writing: The Fisher King, Jackie Brown, Boogie Nights. I absolutly loved HBO's True Detective and wish I could write something that awesome.

I was raised by my Grandmother. I have no sisters and few female cousins, so I feel writing female characters, espeacially female leads is a challenge that I embrace. Most of my stories have gone in that direction.  

Dialogue is something I value most when writing. Maybe that's wrong, but that's why I'm here...to learn.

I don't have much to do with social media sites, but I'm willing to be active in this one. I hope people out here won't mind me sending random inbox messages if I have a quick question from time to time.

I have two scripts posted on this site and I will share the links again. I recently learned that most scripts should be shorter than the 90-100 pages scripts I've completed. I'll keep that in mind for the future. Also they aren't done yet by any means, but pretty close... I hope.

After reading so many scripts from famous movies I've come to the conclusion that if I want to be a better script writer that I will have to disregard most of their writing styles. haha

This might all be "to much information" but I figured I'd give it a shot.

I have 6 scriprts that I picked out from all the unproduced work out here that I am currently reading. I look forward to reading more. I will give my comments and reviews too each as soon as I can.

P.S.  pardon my bad spelling.

Thanks for reading all this...

Rick


Under the Moonlight;

https://www.dropbox.com/s/g76m.....FINAL.DRAFT.doc?dl=0


The Rightous & The Wicked;

https://www.dropbox.com/s/tednvpl09o3hll9/RIGHTEOUSandWICKED.doc?dl=0

Rick,

Welcome to the site! Fantastic place to start and I hope it works out well for you. Btw, Boogie Nights, Fisher King and especially Jackie Brown are among my personal favs! Excellent taste!

Steve

Hi Richard

We seem to have a few new memebers recently, so welcome.

SS is a great site just rememeber to read and review other folks scripts, and they should retrun the favour.

And if you don't know, use the portal button at the top as it gives an overview of what is active

Cheers

Welcome to the site Rick - looking forward to your comments and scripts

Welcome Rick.  Your post answers some of my earlier questions.

Glad to have you aboard.  Feel free to ask any questions.  Peeps are always willing to help around here.  Just make sure you read scripts, leave feedback, and engage as much as you can.

Hope you enjoy the site.

Does anyone run into the problem where the script you're interested in reading was written by someone who obviously doesn't occupy time on this site anymore?  

Welcome to SS!

Lots of us in FL, btw. I'm in Gainesville. :)

"Does anyone run into the problem where the script you're interested in reading was written by someone who obviously doesn't occupy time on this site anymore? "

Lots of people post scripts here and never even visit the forum. That doesn't mean you can't read and comment on the script. Just know that your review might fall of deaf ears. If you are looking for return reads on your own scripts however, it's best to read and comment on scripts written by active members.

:)

Hi Rick, and welcome.

Bear just got in before me, typical. ;) You can pretty much read and review whatever script you choose to but yes, sometimes that person may not be active on the boards. Post a review and they may pop up, who knows...

So long as you also fraternize ;D with the locals you'll be sure to get reciprocal reads. Hope you have fun here, there's no other place like SS imh.

P.S. Loved True Detective - Nic Pizzolatto was first and foremost a novel writer and I reckon it shows in his screenplays. Can't wait to see what he comes up with in the next series.

Thank you everyone for the warm reception, and advice. The portal button does come in very handy.


Angry Bear: I swear I won't give you any nasty reviews even though I'm a Seminole to the bone. I hope we can still be friends. ;)

Steven Clark: I like you already.

Libby: I'm digging the flow to you latest script. I'll get on a review for it tonight. I'm a novice reviewer, but I'll keep it genuine.

Thanks Rick.

Just opened Under The Moonlight and discovered it's in WORD.

You've got the format right which is great, but what you want to do is download one of these:

https://www.celtx.com/index.html

http://www.trelby.org

The two above are free downloads. Or, you can choose one of the paid software. Example below, Final Draft. There are others.

http://www.finaldraft.com

The screenwriting software will make your job as writer a whole lot easier and your script will also look more pro. You can convert your files to PDF as well which is the regular format for uploading. :)

Great advice, Libby!

Shawn.....><

Libby... Thank you! He is correct. That's the type of advice I will truly value.  Danka!

I'm kinda embarrassed at the shape my scripts are currently in. I defiantly look forward to reading reviews of my work, but until I get them polished up properly I totally understand if people want to wait.

This day has gone so much better than I had expected.

Hey Richard,

You'll find that some of these software packages will allow you to transfer word or PDF over to them for almost instant formatting.

for instance, Trelby will allow several formats to be transfered over including PDF, Fountain and FD.

You will want to consider which is for you of course. I still use the free software TRELBY.

not so much because it's free, but because I like it.

And don't be embarressed bro.

You've taken a great first step.

Writing a script.

That's huge, man.

Now build on that.

Take care,

Shawn.....><

Quoted from Ledbetter Don't be embarressed bro, I'm a huge, man. Shawn.....><

He speaks the truth, Rick.  He's a true beheamoth of a man, and that beard you see is actually as big as Roy "Big Country" Nelson.

;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D ;D

Hi, Rick.

Welcome to the board. It used to be a place of harsh feedback but people are exceptionally nice here lately, so you got here at a very good time.

Enjoy the site.

Thanks for those links and great advice, Shawn!