Transhuman by Kevin Doy Burton - Sci Fi, Fantasy - A transhuman female from the year 2530 is sent back in time to the year 2015 to save mankind from extinction due to an alien invasion but mankind fears she is the alien. 129 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hi.

   That sounds like a decent script. How would I read it on this site?

Thanks.

Ken!

Just click on: the bolded text of the title - Transhuman by Kevin Doy Burton - it should open for you. I tried it and the link is fine.

Thank you very much. So sorry for seeming a dumb ass..  

Ken!  

Nice bit of self-deprecating humour there, Ken.  ;D

Welcome to SS btw. Lots of regulars here and lots of scripts to read and in return members will read whatever you've got too. Look to the Portal and to Recent Posts for what's current and of course the Home pages.

Gotcha.  I hope :)

               I must assume you are British, simply because of you're "British English"

I don't really know how to take you're last comment!  Was it good old fashioned Sarcasm or a serious "Heads up" ? Appreciated either way.

Thank you very much.

Best.

Ken!

As you thought. :) Just giving you some tips about the boards. Carry on.

Kevin,

You have to study up on the proper format for introducing characters and listen to how people talk to each other.

                          DARRIN
                Doctor Green, I'm looking
                at the monitor, and the
                satellites are showing
                very little humans in
                the cities but a lot of
                Grays and insects running
                around.
Your very first dialog is a tell. No good.

http://www.writersstore.com/13-things-bad-screenwriters-commonly-do/

^Check this out, it will help.

Tony.