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Posted by: Don, June 20th, 2015, 8:59am
Esordian Legends:  "Vortex of Memories" by Phone Tha - Series, Sci Fi, Fantasy - The untold story of the origin of fairytales through the adventures of a valiant, yet helplessly amnesic, young lad who enlists the aid of various characters of literature to help him unravel the mystery behind their involvement with the creation - and destruction - of worlds.  69 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: TonyDionisio, June 22nd, 2015, 1:45am; Reply: 1
Hi Phone,

Interesting name you have.

I'm struggling to understand your logline

"untold story"  -  Story  alone should suffice, no?

"origin of fairytales" ok

"amnesic young lad" do you mean amnesiac? And how can someone who can't remember accurately tell such a grand story?

How can "characters of literature" be  involved with creating and destroying worlds?

Read a few pages. Hope you show up to the boards.

Tony
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