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Posted by: Don, June 24th, 2015, 6:45pm
Funny Farm by Deshon Porter - Series, Comedy - Life in the burbs from moving day till marriage can Jessica and her boyfriend take it all in stride? 12 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: TonyDionisio, June 24th, 2015, 7:00pm; Reply: 1
Error opening the PDF. Anyone else?
Grammatical errors in the logline as well.
Posted by: rendevous, June 24th, 2015, 7:14pm; Reply: 2
He's right. 404.
The logline seems to be lacking a lot of punctuation, or any frankly. They're avoiding it like it's broccoli
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Posted by: Don, June 24th, 2015, 8:42pm; Reply: 3
Posted by: DustinBowcot (Guest), June 25th, 2015, 2:32am; Reply: 4
Yeah, it's bad. Very bad. I wouldn't even know where to begin correcting this... but if say the authors are around 9... don't lose heart, if you show up, I'll help as much as I can.
Posted by: IamGlenn, June 25th, 2015, 6:20am; Reply: 5
Sorry, couldn't read this.
Formatting is way off and the grammar is very bad. Honestly, you should, at least, have these two things pretty much in check before posting.
Posted by: LC, June 25th, 2015, 7:40am; Reply: 6
He's right. 404.
The logline seems to be lacking a lot of punctuation, or any frankly. They're avoiding it like it's broccoli
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Explains why you left your own punctuation off, right? ;D Goats and keys gone missing, lost your better half in the shops the other day, and now your full-stops - well, one of 'em anyway.
Posted by: rendevous, June 26th, 2015, 5:05am; Reply: 7
Explains why you left your own punctuation off, right? ;D Goats and keys gone missing, lost your better half in the shops the other day, and now your full-stops - well, one of 'em anyway.
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Eh? Oh. I just spotted it. Trust you to see it a about a week before me, Elsie. Good work.
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