Fools by Andrew Herlan - Comedy - Two bad writers and an aspiring stunt woman have three hours to track down the last copy of a screenplay that could be their big break. The only things in their way are cranky bank robbers, a jealous bomber, racist presidential assassins with big egos--and their own screwed-up lives. 128 pages - pdf, format 8)

Quite liked the start of this. I'll come back and comment more if the writer shows themself. Or not, as the case may be.

R

It has a nice start to the movie, dumb and dumber meet Beverly hills cops.  10 pages in and I like the flow, very easy to read.  Seams to have some promise to it.

Not sure if this is the norm, but I notice a lot of the authors don't seem to comment after receiving comments on their work?  What's the point of posting if your not going to engage the readers?