A Potbelly Kind of Summer

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Posted by: Don, September 27th, 2015, 8:22am

A Potbelly Kind of Summer by Samuel W. Smith - Comedy - A boy, his sandwich, and finding love in the oddest of lunch meats. Staten Island Summer meets Crazy Heart. 101 pages - pdf, format 8)

Posted by: ChrisRamsdell, October 23rd, 2015, 10:02am; Reply: 1

Good premise. Maybe add a few more laughable moments. Keep up the good work.

Posted by: Erica, October 25th, 2015, 11:00pm; Reply: 2

Unless this is a shooting script I would loose the scene numbers.

I think the logline needs work, doesn't really hook, it's more of an add than a logline.

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