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Posted by: Don, October 17th, 2015, 9:21am
The Head Office by K Robert Keller - Short - The head man in charge of guillotine operations falls under the knife. 10 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: Logan McDonald, October 18th, 2015, 6:18pm; Reply: 1
Hey Robert,
This was a pretty entertaining story. The dialogue was sharp and witty and also fit the time period kind of like a Mel Brooks film. Jacques is a well written character. Everyone was well written including the hecklers. The only thing was the ending felt a bit rushed. Pierre explaining everything in the last line was a turn off. In all it was a fun read!
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