Life and Loathing by Jonathan Camp - Short, Dramedy - Out of work family man makes good at a porn shop. 47 pages - pdf, format 8)

Hey Jonathan,
it's very readable, it kinda flows nicely, your script reminds me of film Dumb and Dumber.
BUT! I was blushing every now and then until I got to page 6, and then I could read no more! If this was made into a film, it would be a really niche market!!!! I reckon the following section is completely out of limits:

ANDY
(Laughs)
That's right dude, hoes in every
area code! As a matter of fact I
was wrist deep in some pussy not
more than an hour ago. Hey where's
my watch!? Wanna smell my finger?
PAUL
That's fucking sick!...Ya know what
I think I will.
Paul leans over, smells Andy's fingers, then lets out a
wretched dry heave.
PAUL
Your disgusting, do you know that!
Smells like an asshole!
ANDY
(Smells his fingers)
Oh yeah that's Denise, or at least
her asshole anyway.
PAUL
(Dry heaves again)


Anyway, when I recover I may be back to read some more to see where your script takes me! Good luck with your writing,
Marcela