Robert Manula Must Die! by B.J - Action, Adventure - A short and weak police detective must arrest the unknown murderer who's behind the cruel rapes and murders in town to show his wife that he isn't half a man. 98 pages - pdf, format 8)

B.J.,

I would repost this without the red text. There is no need for it. You also need to hone your screenwriting skills. I suggest d/l some scripts and read em.

Tony

Wow!  This script should be viewed by as many peeps as possible.  Absolutely hilarious, sorry to say.

Don't miss out on this gem.

I tried to identify why the red text was used, but I came up short. It's used in a variety of different manners, for action, dialogue, slugs, etc., and it doesn't seem to point towards text added in different drafts, either. (Not that that would be correct for a spec, either.)

If the author appears, I will highlight what else is wrong with the first few pages.