Two by Steven Wood - Short, Drama - After years apart, two friends have a conversation that will be life changing for one, and enlightening for the other. 13 pages - pdf, format 8)

I am currently in the process of pre-production with this short. Within the next few weeks I should have gone through at least one table read with myself and a friend of mine who is an actor.

Steven,

Nice job here, good dialogue driven script with a tight ending. Nice payoff.

One error I did pick up was pg 7 where you have "Matt stands up and starts to pace the room" in Thomas' dialogue.

I enjoyed this. Congrats on the award and pre production. Would be keen to see it when filmed.

Cheers. CB

Thanks for the feedback...and yea, I caught that mistake when I was polishing up some things before reading with the other actor.

I'm debating on showing the fight via flashback, with Matt's narration over the otherwise silent scene.