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Posted by: Don, March 29th, 2016, 8:02pm
Cell/Mate by Dennis Coleman - Horror - Limited location horror thriller: THE THING in a jail. A spoiled rich kid is locked in jail with a malevolent alien disguised as a human. No one believes him, so he’s got to figure out how to battle this monster and save the world on his own. 113 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: TimC, June 29th, 2016, 6:15am; Reply: 1
Read the first 15 pages of this...struggled to read any further.

The opening conversation between Mitch and Sara is far too serious a conversation to be had over the phone whilst one of the participants is fanging his car as fast as it'll take him.

I liked the concept, but I just couldn't take it seriously with that opening conversation, a talking car and a homeless wordsmith.
Posted by: Busy Little Bee, February 11th, 2017, 10:59am; Reply: 2
Hey, Dennis

The Thing comparisons draws intrigue, but leaves a lot to live up to.

BLB
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