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Posted by: Don, June 3rd, 2016, 9:01am
When Time Left Me by Luis Garza - Short, Drama - 761 year old Aelric has grown tired of loosing every person he ever loved and has lived isolated from his family for over 200 years. However, an unfortunate occurrence roots Aelric's great-grandson to move into his home. 22 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: RichardR, June 10th, 2016, 3:35pm; Reply: 1
Luis,

Some notes.

I liked this one.  I thought it was too slow in the beginning and too fast at the end.  Perhaps that's to show how time seems to run faster as you age.  It had a bittersweet ending, but it was the only ending possible given the premise.  

Best
Richard
Posted by: LuisAnthony, June 11th, 2016, 9:50pm; Reply: 2
Thanks for reading!!
I will look over the script and tighten up the pacing. I'm glad you liked it!!

Regards,
Luis
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