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Posted by: Don, June 10th, 2016, 4:17pm
The Girl and the Machine by Chris Hatfield - Short, Action, Adventure - Raife Loxley is a gunrunner on the lookout for her sister, who was sold into prostitution, but has vanished off the map. At one of her regular stops, she is pulled into delivering a "special cargo" to a mysterious voice over the radio who claims to know exactly where her sister is located. 28 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: cloroxmartini, June 11th, 2016, 6:03am; Reply: 1
Interesting. Writing can use some work but the story is there. Some of it misses the mark for me, how tough the girls are, but the ending is a good tease.
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