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Posted by: Don, June 12th, 2016, 8:33am
Anniversary by Luke Prince - Short, Drama - A couples anniversary is interrupted by a violent crime. 3 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: AnthonyCawood, June 12th, 2016, 4:01pm; Reply: 1
Short but sweet... well quite dark actually but I liked it... twist was effective.

I think the initial V.O. should technically be O.C. but depends if you mean it as narration (V.O.) or to be heard as actual sounds, just off camera (O.C.).

Good luck with it.
Posted by: RichardR, June 14th, 2016, 1:13pm; Reply: 2
Luke,

Some notes.

This one needs some polish.  It starts off well, and the wife becomes believeable.  Then, the reverse works.  The someone in this story is well known.  Of course, she can't hope to get away with this, but she wants to blame some third party anyway.  

Best
Richard
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