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Posted by: Don, June 16th, 2016, 8:03pm
Anotha House Party with Two Dope Guys in the City by Andre Campbell - Comedy - In order to throw a hot party on Friday, two hip high school guys embark on a wild week filled with fun and freaky females. 109 pages - pdf, format 8)
Posted by: cloroxmartini, June 17th, 2016, 1:38am; Reply: 1
Link isn't working for me.

Lose the title!
Posted by: NW3, June 17th, 2016, 3:30am; Reply: 2

Quoted from Don
fun and freaky females.

So the freaky females are not fun? I predict the title will be the best thing about it. Anotha!

Andre, if you check in here, let us know what your plans are with this. I already know you need help. Whether you get it...

Posted by: Don, June 17th, 2016, 11:12am; Reply: 3
Link to script has been fixed.

- Don
Posted by: cloroxmartini, June 17th, 2016, 11:53am; Reply: 4
Thanks, Don.

Page 27 and I'm done.

There really isn't a story here as much as it's a slice of life. It's a slice of life I have no clue about so that made it interesting for me, but after a while it's like I'm hearing the same person from all these different characters. I can sense the inspiration of the story though through the writing. It's wordy for a script, too much seasoning really. Niche market story, I think.
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